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Monday, January 26, 2015

Trying to condense a timeline.

1. Az and Dar bored patrol.
2. Scene with the young ones.
3. Darrow and Az show up. Report little signs of Serkan, other than old scent trails and tracks leading away, to Alastar.
4. Alastar has the guard change out with Verena and Lark.
5. Scene goes to Alastar entering the den to confer with Dusk.  With the border patrol back, Alastar takes Dusk out to survey places where Serkan has been sighted most.  Dusk, looking hesitant, suggests that Alastar end Serkan's suffering.  Why prolong it? Alastar is not pleased, and lashes out about Serkan being his father.  How could he kill his own blood?  But how could he keep his pack safe?  Dusk, bowing his head, leaves his alpha to his thoughts.

END CHAPTER 1.

1. Chapter 2 beings with hazy panels.  Distorted images.  Flashbacks of the pack.  Of Sheska.
2. Serkan comes across a small group of wolves.  Confused and in pain, he flips, slaughtering 2 of the them.  The remaining 2 wolves get away.  After the fight,  Serkan bays a long mournful howl (birds flee), and starts back in the direction from whence he came.
3. The scene splits to the birds flying, spreading the word that Serkan is moving toward the pack again.  This causes a panic and heightened tempers.

More for this chapter later.

SOMETIME AT THE END.
1. Whatever happens to fatally wound Serkan, it brings him back to himself.  Before he dies, he looks up at Alastar and says "Before I go...thank you".

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